Your web page headline is the most important factor that determines if your site visitor stays or bounces away. A compelling headline will have him or her wanting to read more. An uninspiring headline will cause him or her to immediately go away!
How do you write good headlines?
The truth is, powerful headline creation ideas are all around you. It is very easy to improve your existing headline to one that really works!

Before you decide to change your headline, you should
- Determine the target market the headline is meant for.
- Write down the most powerful benefit your product or service offers. Think your product has too many benefits? See the types of headlines below to decide which benefit should be highlighted in the headline.
Now use one of the following headline types.
Headlines that enumerate a list (People have an affinity to read lists!)
- Five ideas to improve your ----
- Top Ten Reasons To ...
- Four Things You Absolutely Must Know To ....
- Ten Reasons Why ----
Headlines that ask about a problem the reader will identify with
- Do you suffer from ...?
- Are you threatened by ...
- Do you often find yourself struggling ...
Headlines that offer to teach you or make you an expert
- Learn How To ...
- Discover The Top ...
- A Guide To ...
- Every Thing You Wanted To Know About ...
Headlines that offer secrets
- They Tried To Ban This ...
- Secrets Uncovered ...
- Exposed For The First Time Ever ...
- The Real Secrets To ...
- The Ugly Truth Behind ...
Headlines offering instant gratification
- Instantly Transform ...
- Instant Strategies To Create ...
- You Can Do This In Five Minutes ...
- Get An Instant 35% Boost ...
Headlines offering to simplify things
- Simple Ideas To ...
- This is Not For The Experts ...
- ... For The Rest Of Us
- ... Any One Can Do In Their Spare Time!
Headlines announcing something
- Releasing Shortly...
- Announcing The...
- Now Available For The First Time ...
- Offer Closing Soon ...
Headlines that offer a guarantee
- .... 100% Money Back!
- Guaranteed To ...
Headlines that contain a testimonial
- I started using ... The results have been fantastic ...
- I could never believe ...
- ... Amazing! Thank You ....
Picture / Graphic Headline
Screen shot with a caption, Illustration etc. Use this if a picture is more likely to immediately grab the attention. However you will still need a compelling sub-heading or caption.
Headlines that shock
- No examples! Just read a tabloid!
More Headline Rules...
- Be specific and avoid generality. A headline that says some thing very general is not going to attract any one because they have seen it all before. There should always be a unique or specific benefit mentioned in the headline.
- A headline should make the reader want to continue. Create multiple headlines and do an A/B test to find the best one. Then create new ones and try to beat the old headline.
Coming Soon! Headline Generator and Swipe File Manager
We will be releasing a new software (stand alone, integrated into IM Toolpad and the upcoming Internet Strategy Studio) for creating good headlines. Watch this blog!